Wednesday, January 31, 2007

1263.

His son wrote as he did: with constant parentheticals that turned a simple sentence into a bouquet of parentheses and commas.

1 comment:

Lita said...

Sounds a little like the way I tend to write--trying to pack all the details into it. For me, at least, the sentence gets unwieldy and a bit hard to follow if you're not already in my mind. It's hard when there's a lot of details you want to share.